Recently, I started writing my own novel that depicts life in Dubai - as I know it anyway... I'd love to get your feedback on it! I can't post any links apparently, so please Google Desperate in Dubai and check out the blog. I really will apprecite all feedback - and looking for constructive criticism from other writers as well!
Thank you in advance![/color]
- ghostwriter wrote:
Thanks for your feedback!! Haven't considered adding male desperates.... Seeing as you guys are from Mars and all that, don't think I can do the male species justice as yet!
Are we really that bad huh? :lol: Bora Bora
- RobbyG wrote:
- ghostwriter wrote:
Thanks for your feedback!! Haven't considered adding male desperates.... Seeing as you guys are from Mars and all that, don't think I can do the male species justice as yet!
Are we really that bad huh? :lol: - ghostwriter wrote:
Well RobbyG, if she ever considered it, I could certainly give her a good whiff about you!!! RobbyG
- Bora Bora wrote:
- RobbyG wrote:
- ghostwriter wrote:
Thanks for your feedback!! Haven't considered adding male desperates.... Seeing as you guys are from Mars and all that, don't think I can do the male species justice as yet!
Are we really that bad huh? :lol: - ghostwriter wrote:
Well RobbyG, if she ever considered it, I could certainly give her a good whiff about you!!! - RobbyG wrote:
There you go, you blasted my character now 8) Misery Called Life
- RobbyG wrote:
- Bora Bora wrote:
- RobbyG wrote:
- ghostwriter wrote:
Thanks for your feedback!! Haven't considered adding male desperates.... Seeing as you guys are from Mars and all that, don't think I can do the male species justice as yet!
Are we really that bad huh? :lol: - ghostwriter wrote:
Well RobbyG, if she ever considered it, I could certainly give her a good whiff about you!!! - RobbyG wrote:
There you go, you blasted my character now 8) - Bora Bora wrote:
Sorry Rob, but neither are you scandelous nor mysterious nor decadent enough to be her muse :lol:
I'm surprised that Gossip Girl fan RC and in-house literary expert SH have not commented yet. Misery Called Life
- ghostwriter wrote:
Thanks for your feedback!! Haven't considered adding male desperates.... Seeing as you guys are from Mars and all that, don't think I can do the male species justice as yet!
Naa ur too talented to be bogged down by lame sterotypes. Find a male muse, wrte bout him galore and then use a spotter.......Watsay?
Say Ghost writer, Tell us more bout you? Like you in university right now?
As far as this blog goes, what are ur influences?
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- Misery Called Life wrote:
I'm surprised that Gossip Girl fan RC and in-house literary expert SH have not commented yet.
Oh boy, I don't know why it's here but he commented. Actually he is too old to remember the subject. You are probably to young. :wink: RobbyG
- Misery Called Life wrote:
- ghostwriter wrote:
Thanks for your feedback!! Haven't considered adding male desperates.... Seeing as you guys are from Mars and all that, don't think I can do the male species justice as yet!
Naa ur too talented to be bogged down by lame sterotypes. Find a male muse, wrte bout him galore and then use a spotter.......Watsay?
Say Ghost writer, Tell us more bout you? Like you in university right now?
As far as this blog goes, what are ur influences? - ghostwriter wrote:
Good question MCL. I want to know more about this 'ghostwoman'.
kinda attractive :wink: catalyst
- ghostwriter wrote:
[color=darkblue]Hey everyone...
Recently, I started writing my own novel that depicts life in Dubai - as I know it anyway... I'd love to get your feedback on it! I can't post any links apparently, so please Google Desperate in Dubai and check out the blog. I really will apprecite all feedback - and looking for constructive criticism from other writers as well!
Thank you in advance![/color]
please move forward :roll: RobbyG
- catalyst wrote:
- ghostwriter wrote:
[color=darkblue]Hey everyone...
Recently, I started writing my own novel that depicts life in Dubai - as I know it anyway... I'd love to get your feedback on it! I can't post any links apparently, so please Google Desperate in Dubai and check out the blog. I really will apprecite all feedback - and looking for constructive criticism from other writers as well!
Thank you in advance![/color]
please move forward :roll: - ghostwriter wrote:
Be nice Catalyst. Show some decency :lol: catalyst tell me whats wrong this time ?! RobbyG
- catalyst wrote:
tell me whats wrong this time ?!
Nothing, just playing with you ;) catalyst ok .. Just remember you started this ^___* Nice dearms >>>> ^__^ ghostwriter Lol, quite a little witty banter thing you guys have going on here :D You want to know more about me?? Why, when my characters are far more interesting? As for being 'kinda attractive' - how on earth would you know?! Misery Called Life
- ghostwriter wrote:
Lol, quite a little witty banter thing you guys have going on here :D
You want to know more about me?? Why, when my characters are far more interesting?
My fair lady, 'The lamborghini's great, but it's the driver I'm interested in'
Gotta say, I really dig your 'fly on the wall' style of narrating. It's immenesly intriguing how people around us mask their true personas. Ahh the mysteries of Dubai......continue fuelling my imagination ghost writer :D
- Misery Called Life wrote:
Sorry Rob, but neither are you scandelous nor mysterious nor decadent enough to be her muse :lol:
I'm surprised that Gossip Girl fan RC and in-house literary expert SH have not commented yet.
Oho!!
The Commissar is probably into Samurai Girl now.... ghostwriter *blush* I don't know what to say... I'd rather talk about other people than myself. Chocoholic
- ghostwriter wrote:
Lol, quite a little witty banter thing you guys have going on here :D
You want to know more about me?? Why, when my characters are far more interesting? As for being 'kinda attractive' - how on earth would you know?!
Because there's a picture on your profile on your blogging page :roll: ghostwriter Ah...but that is not me. That is Lady Luxe :D Chocoholic That's pretty much what I thought. But you know the guys rond here, well, they're not so smart. ghostwriter Hehe, clearly!!! RobbyG
- Chocoholic wrote:
That's pretty much what I thought. But you know the guys rond here, well, they're not so smart.
wtf...somebody gonna get a-hurt real bad, right Chocsy? :D RobbyG
- ghostwriter wrote:
Hehe, clearly!!!
You are new, so you are forgiven :D ;) ghostwriter Wow, been leaving me a lot of comments haven't you?? ;) Hurry up and sign up as a facebook fan...yalla! RobbyG
- ghostwriter wrote:
Wow, been leaving me a lot of comments haven't you?? ;) Hurry up and sign up as a facebook fan...yalla!
Sorry my lady, I don't intend to use Facebook.
I'm haram (gniff gniff) :lol: ghostwriter No Facebook?! *shock & horror* Well...to each their own... RobbyG
- ghostwriter wrote:
No Facebook?! *shock & horror*
Well...to each their own...
No facebook, but plenty of other social networking sites I do not intend to disclose publicly ;)
Each to their own 8) Misery Called Life
- ghostwriter wrote:
No Facebook?! *shock & horror*
Well...to each their own...
*holding hands up helplessly* We're just not technologically inclined.
We are the anti FB generation, besides I had to delete my profile(too many admirers) :lol:
So now ur just gonna have to divide ur time between ur other sites and dubai forums.
Pssst it's a conspiracy by Robby to have you all to himself here RobbyG
- Misery Called Life wrote:
- ghostwriter wrote:
No Facebook?! *shock & horror*
Well...to each their own...
*holding hands up helplessly* We're just not technologically inclined.
We are th eanti FB generation, besides I had to delete my profile(too many admirers) :lol:
So now ur just gonna have to divide ur time between ur other sites and dubai forums.
Pssst it's a conspiracy by Robby to have you all to himself here [/size] - ghostwriter wrote:
You are one slick fellow. :wink: Misery Called Life
- RobbyG wrote:
- Misery Called Life wrote:
- ghostwriter wrote:
No Facebook?! *shock & horror*
Well...to each their own...
*holding hands up helplessly* We're just not technologically inclined.
We are th eanti FB generation, besides I had to delete my profile(too many admirers) :lol:
So now ur just gonna have to divide ur time between ur other sites and dubai forums.
Pssst it's a conspiracy by Robby to have you all to himself here [/size] - ghostwriter wrote:
You are one slick fellow. :wink: - Misery Called Life wrote:
I'm learning from the best :D RobbyG
- Misery Called Life wrote:
- RobbyG wrote:
- Misery Called Life wrote:
- ghostwriter wrote:
No Facebook?! *shock & horror*
Well...to each their own...
*holding hands up helplessly* We're just not technologically inclined.
We are th eanti FB generation, besides I had to delete my profile(too many admirers) :lol:
So now ur just gonna have to divide ur time between ur other sites and dubai forums.
Pssst it's a conspiracy by Robby to have you all to himself here [/size] - ghostwriter wrote:
You are one slick fellow. :wink: - Misery Called Life wrote:
I'm learning from the best :D - RobbyG wrote:
haha wonderful :lol:
Tone the arrogance a bit down please. I didn't taught you that ;) :D ghostwriter Easy boys...! :o If you're not from the facebook generation, then methinks you're perhaps a tad too old to be vying after my attention?! :p Misery Called Life
- ghostwriter wrote:
Easy boys...! :o If you're not from the facebook generation, then methinks you're perhaps a tad too old to be vying after my attention?! :p
How demanding...What a diva! :D
Say no more chapters until after Ramadan? Speedhump Hi children! Just caught this thread, some of us work for a living you know. I dipped in to the blog here and there, had quite a few chuckles at places and personality types well recognised. :D I'll give the link to my daughter, she's pretty high maintenance herself so she may get a kick out of it. Ghostwriter, good luck navigating the sub-teen testosterone on Dubai Forums. Mine is currently not on display.... ;) MCL, personally I love divas, just don't give them your credit card. :P RobbyG
- Speedhump wrote:
- Misery Called Life wrote:
Sorry Rob, but neither are you scandelous nor mysterious nor decadent enough to be her muse :lol:
I'm surprised that Gossip Girl fan RC and in-house literary expert SH have not commented yet.
Oho!!
The Commissar is probably into Samurai Girl now.... - Misery Called Life wrote:
Fat Samurai Girl you mean...
- RobbyG wrote:
- Misery Called Life wrote:
- RobbyG wrote:
You are one slick fellow. :wink:
I'm learning from the best :D - RobbyG wrote:
haha wonderful :lol:
Tone the arrogance a bit down please. I didn't taught you that ;) :D - Misery Called Life wrote:
Baba,
I was referring to Goldenboy and Mr Delicious characters in her blog? :lol: mehreen I love your writing. You sure are talented! Misery Called Life
- mehreen wrote:
I love your writing. You sure are talented!
She's currently working on her Houdini act :lol: ghostwriter
- Misery Called Life wrote:
- mehreen wrote:
I love your writing. You sure are talented!
She's currently working on her Houdini act :lol: - mehreen wrote:
Excuse me.. I certainly am not :P I am taking a well-deserved Ramadan break thank you very much :P Speedhump On Chap.12 now and enjoying your direct and fresh style. An easy read. The male characters are a bit cardboad cutout; either for eye candy or vilification purposes only, but no matter, the woman's actions and motives are fun to read. Thanks. ghostwriter Thanks for the feedback Speedhump.. I agree with you about the male characters. Hopefully they will develop more over time :)